Monday, December 20, 2010






She was there kept inside when I was looking to have someone like her
First came a black and then a brown of both having a perfect curve
Confused I was scanning them closely for some clue
Though bold black being my all time favorite
A little spot on her made my head turning
To the flawless beauty the bright browny..
 My ignorance was at such profound levels
When she was with me I was never able to do any justice to her
From changing chords to rhythmic strumming
Oh my God I was found terribly wanting
But to her deepest dismay I was still holding on
Blithely unaware of the fact that the time has come
For her to leave and for me to start crying..
As she moved on to my dearest cousin, I say
Hi young prodigy hope you make browny happy
By helping in finding her divine destiny..

10 comments:

Anchana said...

Great work anna!beautiful sketch of art to honour the other...

ச. சிவராம் குமார் said...

u made me miss mine too...
good work Manix!

REMYA ROSHNI said...

its so far the best one...keep it up

Manick said...

Thanks a lot..!!!..dear friends...

Anonymous said...

Well written friend...
Enjoyed reading those musical lines

Manick said...

thank u priceless friend..!!

tapasya said...

Some deep river flowing beneath the ice..i never could gauge this Manick had i not read

Manick said...

deep river...ice...i dont understand anything..LOL..:)

akhil said...

straight from d heart.

Manick said...

thanx akhil..:)

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