Little girl in the beach
It’s a pleasant evening I am having a walk in the beach
The refurbished esplanade is a treat to people’s aesthetic taste
There are huge stones arranged along the edge of a thematic gallery
Quite reminiscent of the Stone Age’s glory
First I thought it is a novel way of fencing
Later realised it can also be used for sitting and relaxing
Then came this little girl clad in a tight jeans and a sweater
A cutie and a little beauty
Very active and agile in her duty
Thrown away her shoes at once
And started playing by hopping over the artistic stones
Me who immersed in the book could not help myself
But for throwing my book away
And joining the beautiful game
What a way to use those stones
Which have never stricken my mind before
At the end I gracefully thanked her
For introducing me to this refreshing sport..
7 comments:
Mighty Nice Manix!
u made me visualize the scene...
ur vocab is amazing....
Hats off!
very nice one anna!!
expecting about any abstract thing next anna!!
A Delightfully Beautiful and simple poem. The poem shows ur fantastic play with words. ur readiness to learn a lesson from a kid's play is commendable. Matter is more poetic than the manner.
-Chithi
VERY NICE...IT WAS HIGHLY NARRATIVE ..TRY TO PAINT THIS SCENE.
THE PURITY AND INNOCENCE OF KIDS FASCINATE EVEN PEOPLE LIKE ME.NEEDLESS TO EXPLORE ITS EFFECT ON U WITH GOOD POETIC SENSE.A FINE EFFORT....
thank u very much dear all for ur care and support....
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