Thursday, December 24, 2009


Little girl in the beach

It’s a pleasant evening I am having a walk in the beach

The refurbished esplanade is a treat to people’s aesthetic taste

There are huge stones arranged along the edge of a thematic gallery

Quite reminiscent of the Stone Age’s glory

First I thought it is a novel way of fencing

Later realised it can also be used for sitting and relaxing

Then came this little girl clad in a tight jeans and a sweater

A cutie and a little beauty

Very active and agile in her duty

Thrown away her shoes at once

And started playing by hopping over the artistic stones

Me who immersed in the book could not help myself

But for throwing my book away

And joining the beautiful game

What a way to use those stones

Which have never stricken my mind before

At the end I gracefully thanked her

For introducing me to this refreshing sport..

7 comments:

ச. சிவராம் குமார் said...

Mighty Nice Manix!
u made me visualize the scene...
ur vocab is amazing....
Hats off!

INIAN'S WORLD said...

very nice one anna!!

INIAN'S WORLD said...

expecting about any abstract thing next anna!!

Aswin Karthik said...

A Delightfully Beautiful and simple poem. The poem shows ur fantastic play with words. ur readiness to learn a lesson from a kid's play is commendable. Matter is more poetic than the manner.

-Chithi

REMYA ROSHNI said...

VERY NICE...IT WAS HIGHLY NARRATIVE ..TRY TO PAINT THIS SCENE.

Unknown said...

THE PURITY AND INNOCENCE OF KIDS FASCINATE EVEN PEOPLE LIKE ME.NEEDLESS TO EXPLORE ITS EFFECT ON U WITH GOOD POETIC SENSE.A FINE EFFORT....

Manick said...

thank u very much dear all for ur care and support....

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